Add review reports for Chapter 1, Chapter 2, and Chapter 2-Side; include image assets and logic checks
- Created Chapter1-review.md with syntax, character definitions, and dialogue checks. - Created Chapter2-review.md with syntax, missing images, and logic errors. - Created Chapter2-Side-review.md addressing syntax, character definitions, and dialogue issues. - Added SUMMARY.md to summarize review findings and highlight critical issues. - Included new image assets for xiaowei and backup files. - Identified and documented several logic errors and suggestions for code cleanup across chapters.
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@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ label Chapter1_Scene1:
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mom "「17:40校门口便利店,别迟到。」"
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show ryt dialogue normal at right
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me "......妈妈又给我发这消息"
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me "我得等车。\n你们先打,下次我一定来 {cps=3} {cps=20}——前提是我妈能接受她儿子在篮球场上挥洒青春而不是在车里背单词。"
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me "我得等车。\n你们先打,下次我一定来 {cps=3} {cps=20}——前提是我妈能接受她儿子在篮球场上挥洒青春而不是在车里背单词。"
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show xingyu at left
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xingyu "涛哥,你这样不行啊,迟早得「起义」。"
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stop sound fadeout 1.0
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@@ -201,16 +201,16 @@ label Chapter1_Scene3:
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scene bg corridor with dissolve
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"【同日下午·高二一班走廊】"
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show xiaowei at left with dissolve
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"同一时间,另一个人也在看那张照片。"
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tongxue "晓薇你快看!这不是你们一班那个任懿涛吗?他怎么还是这么搞笑!"
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show xiaowei at right with dissolve
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xiaowei "拍得好生动啊!你们说,要是我也这样跳起来打人,会不会也这么有效果?"
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tongxue "哈哈哈哈!"
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hide xiaowei with dissolve
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stop music fadeout 1.0
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"{cps=20}她笑着,眼睛却没有离开屏幕。"
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"{cps=20}那种真实的活力,让她觉得……在礼貌而疏离的文科班里,有什么东西被触动了。"
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hide xiaowei with dissolve
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#system_ "【切换账号:薇风拂晓】"
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play music "audio/XinLanDiary-Part1.ogg" fadein 2.0
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@@ -387,10 +387,11 @@ label Chapter1_Scene4:
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scene bg black with fade
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system_ "【同夜·城市另一头】"
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scene bg yutong room night with dissolve
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me "城市的另一头,苏雨桐刚回到家。"
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yutong "TaoliTaoli……今天依然没有更新。"
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system_ "【任懿涛画廊·访问计数器:+1】"
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me "她一张张翻看那些照片。相册里已经积累了二十几张,按时间顺序排列。"
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"她一张张翻看那些照片。相册里已经积累了二十几张,按时间顺序排列。"
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yutong "……在这个高度秩序化的生活里,观察一个如此不协调、如此鲜活的存在……有种奇妙的慰藉。"
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$ yutong_stats["affection"] += 3
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@@ -398,6 +399,7 @@ label Chapter1_Scene4:
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pause 0.5
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system_ "【几公里外·林晓薇的房间】"
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scene bg xiaowei room night with dissolve
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me "几公里外,林晓薇躺在床上,盯着天花板发呆。"
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me_w "你问的那个人,确实是我们学校的。怎么,你认识?"
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me "那条回复躺在对话框里,她还没想好怎么回。"
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pause 1.5
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system_ "【第一章·画廊风波·完】"
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return
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jump Chapter2_Scene1
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