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XinLanDiary/review/SUMMARY.md
Cafw 6c65eafa32 Add review reports for Chapter 1, Chapter 2, and Chapter 2-Side; include image assets and logic checks
- Created Chapter1-review.md with syntax, character definitions, and dialogue checks.
- Created Chapter2-review.md with syntax, missing images, and logic errors.
- Created Chapter2-Side-review.md addressing syntax, character definitions, and dialogue issues.
- Added SUMMARY.md to summarize review findings and highlight critical issues.
- Included new image assets for xiaowei and backup files.
- Identified and documented several logic errors and suggestions for code cleanup across chapters.
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审阅总览

审阅日期: 2026-04-26 | 项目版本: dev0.0.8.5

审阅范围

文件 行数 场景数 报告
game/Chapters/Chapter1.rpy 429 4 (Scene1~4) Chapter1-review.md
game/Chapters/Chapter2/Chapter2.rpy 440 7 (Scene1, C2S2~S7) Chapter2-review.md
game/Chapters/Chapter2/Chapter2-Side.rpy 126 4 (C2Side1, S1~S3) Chapter2-Side-review.md

问题汇总(按严重程度排序)

🔴 严重 — 必须修复

# 文件 位置 问题
1 Chapter2-Side.rpy 行89 极度不当台词me "你妈死了刘泓予!" — 突兀辱骂,与角色人设完全不符
2 Chapter2-Side.rpy 行7 return 导致游戏退出:好感不足时应 jump C2S2 而非 return
3 Chapter2.rpy 行178-181 C2S3 条件跳转无效:缺少 else,条件形同虚设
4 Chapter2.rpy 5 个图像文件缺失bg computer lab, bg computer lab door, yutong (sprite), bg schoolgate evening, bg ryt room night

⚠️ 警告 — 建议修复

# 文件 位置 问题
5 Chapter2.rpy 行63 不当用词("男娘"/"男同" 称呼同学)
6 Chapter2.rpy 行301 "仁懿涛"疑为"任懿涛"错别字
7 Chapter2.rpy 行44,48,51 flag["lhy_team"] / flag["C2S1_think"] 只写未读
8 Chapter2-Side.rpy 行75 flag["C4"] 只写未读
9 Chapter1.rpy 行128 hide ryt 无效操作scene 已清空show 已被注释)
10 Chapter1.rpy 行235 is_xiaowei_w = False 冗余(默认已是 False

💡 建议 — 清理优化

# 文件 位置 问题
11 Chapter1.rpy 多处 删除元数据注释(.lzx 标注、注释掉的废弃代码)
12 Chapter1.rpy 行343 "便利店主" 建议定义为 Character 对象
13 Chapter2.rpy 行325-326 删除废弃的注释代码

各角色 stats 定义完整性

全部通过。所有在 Chapters 中使用的 stat key 均在 script.rpy 中正确定义,无拼写错误。

跳转目标完整性

跳转 目标标签 所在文件 状态
jump Chapter1_Scene2/3/4 同文件 Chapter1.rpy
jump Chapter2_Scene1 Chapter2_Scene1 Chapter2.rpy:5
jump C2Side1 C2Side1 Chapter2-Side.rpy:4
jump C2S2~S7 同文件 Chapter2.rpy
jump C2Side1S1/S2/S3 同文件 Chapter2-Side.rpy