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- Created Chapter1-review.md with syntax, character definitions, and dialogue checks. - Created Chapter2-review.md with syntax, missing images, and logic errors. - Created Chapter2-Side-review.md addressing syntax, character definitions, and dialogue issues. - Added SUMMARY.md to summarize review findings and highlight critical issues. - Included new image assets for xiaowei and backup files. - Identified and documented several logic errors and suggestions for code cleanup across chapters.
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# 审阅总览
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> 审阅日期: 2026-04-26 | 项目版本: dev0.0.8.5
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## 审阅范围
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| 文件 | 行数 | 场景数 | 报告 |
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|------|------|--------|------|
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| `game/Chapters/Chapter1.rpy` | 429 | 4 (Scene1~4) | [Chapter1-review.md](Chapter1-review.md) |
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| `game/Chapters/Chapter2/Chapter2.rpy` | 440 | 7 (Scene1, C2S2~S7) | [Chapter2-review.md](Chapter2-review.md) |
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| `game/Chapters/Chapter2/Chapter2-Side.rpy` | 126 | 4 (C2Side1, S1~S3) | [Chapter2-Side-review.md](Chapter2-Side-review.md) |
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---
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## 问题汇总（按严重程度排序）
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### 🔴 严重 — 必须修复
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| # | 文件 | 位置 | 问题 |
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|---|------|------|------|
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| 1 | Chapter2-Side.rpy | 行89 | **极度不当台词**：`me "你妈死了刘泓予!"` — 突兀辱骂，与角色人设完全不符 |
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| 2 | Chapter2-Side.rpy | 行7 | **`return` 导致游戏退出**：好感不足时应 `jump C2S2` 而非 `return` |
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| 3 | Chapter2.rpy | 行178-181 | **C2S3 条件跳转无效**：缺少 `else`，条件形同虚设 |
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| 4 | Chapter2.rpy | — | **5 个图像文件缺失**：`bg computer lab`, `bg computer lab door`, `yutong` (sprite), `bg schoolgate evening`, `bg ryt room night` |
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### ⚠️ 警告 — 建议修复
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| # | 文件 | 位置 | 问题 |
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| 5 | Chapter2.rpy | 行63 | 不当用词（"男娘"/"男同" 称呼同学） |
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| 6 | Chapter2.rpy | 行301 | "仁懿涛"疑为"任懿涛"错别字 |
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| 7 | Chapter2.rpy | 行44,48,51 | `flag["lhy_team"]` / `flag["C2S1_think"]` 只写未读 |
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| 8 | Chapter2-Side.rpy | 行75 | `flag["C4"]` 只写未读 |
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| 9 | Chapter1.rpy | 行128 | `hide ryt` 无效操作（scene 已清空，show 已被注释） |
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| 10 | Chapter1.rpy | 行235 | `is_xiaowei_w = False` 冗余（默认已是 False） |
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### 💡 建议 — 清理优化
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| # | 文件 | 位置 | 问题 |
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| 11 | Chapter1.rpy | 多处 | 删除元数据注释（`.lzx` 标注、注释掉的废弃代码） |
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| 12 | Chapter1.rpy | 行343 | `"便利店主"` 建议定义为 Character 对象 |
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| 13 | Chapter2.rpy | 行325-326 | 删除废弃的注释代码 |
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---
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## 各角色 stats 定义完整性
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全部通过。所有在 Chapters 中使用的 stat key 均在 `script.rpy` 中正确定义，无拼写错误。
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## 跳转目标完整性
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| 跳转 | 目标标签 | 所在文件 | 状态 |
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|------|----------|----------|------|
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| `jump Chapter1_Scene2/3/4` | 同文件 | Chapter1.rpy | ✓ |
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| `jump Chapter2_Scene1` | Chapter2_Scene1 | Chapter2.rpy:5 | ✓ |
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| `jump C2Side1` | C2Side1 | Chapter2-Side.rpy:4 | ✓ |
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| `jump C2S2~S7` | 同文件 | Chapter2.rpy | ✓ |
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| `jump C2Side1S1/S2/S3` | 同文件 | Chapter2-Side.rpy | ✓ |
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